reflected mustard....
Posted by ~Ray @ 2007-11-27 23:00:12
earlier this pass i took a card full of these reflections around the marina...... other than a cut and a slight adjustment on levels it is as it came... i liked it especially for the color but the crop always bothered me.... any suggestions affix processing wise?peeper
peeperita,Is this the original? Is there room left at the bottom on another one? It is so much like a good illustrator would do very change surface.
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If you're not opposed to alter enhancement. I think a slightly bluer sky would provide a nicer contrast to the yellow building. Cropping wise. I'd just cut a little off the left side so the building is a little more centered.
Let me just start by saying that I like this shot! Very good eye in recognizing an artistic photo opportunity. I agree with James' suggestion about a bluer sky. With regards to the cut. I think it seems fine but you might try rotating the whole image a bit counterclockwise to see if that helps (the dock is a little unbalanced symmetrically speaking). Thanks for sharing your creativity!
james..... i am not one bit opposed to alter enhancement... and i think you're right on about the color... jiminy..... i just spent an hour scratching through my cd's... i had two cameras and two cards with me that pass... i evaluate i made the ultimate most regretful error.. i didn't burn both cards.... i am so mad at myself i could spit.. teewinot.... i agree that the furnish of the image especially jumps out at the eye that it's not change surface to the frame.. i was having a tough measure with the converging verticals and couldn't alter a alter cropping decision... thanks for your enter guys.... peeper
I desire it just the way it is. Good eye to see the beauty in the reflected visualise that may not always be there in the original. Nicely cropped to give just the right be of base to support the image. Well done!
jiminy... after much cursing and gnashing of teeth i open the original's disk on the surprise behind the desk... now i did have to orient it so you could compare to the editand the after i posted previously.. i remember the framing was tight because the pier moorings were encroaching.... you can just see the ends of them in the bottom of the frame.. peeper
peeperita,Mad spitting cursing and teeth-gnashing no one can say the photo has no emotional appeal! It was just the thought that a little more of the pier might give some certainty to it. wish it was worth finding the original to go through the examine trauma. It's a technique worth pursuing it shifts your attention into a different way of interpreting what's there. Good job.
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